Anita Magdalena

Anita Magdalena

Wednesday, 1 December 2010

Yet To Be

Picture by Anne Stokes
Poem by Anita Magdalena....

Yet To Be

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I touched the alabaster wall
Rivulets icy cold did fall
Selenite buried there within
permeates it's warmth into my skin

Of darkness I am not afraid
a shadow maybe walks the glade
A state of mind can bear more fuel
than the witterings of a soulless fool

Touched so deeply to never know
the place you transport me to never go
Would leave me with a ghostly veil
if this were never to prevail

Engulfed in the shadows of sleeping hours
castle walls disappearing towers
There the winds whisperings come to me
in the dark times they help me see
03/01/2010

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35 comments:

  1. Anita...?
    Spectacular
    Brilliant
    Beautiful....WOW!

    Thank You for visiting.

    I'm definately not worthy, but thanks...Galen

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  2. Thank you for visiting, much appreciated, Galen.

    Anita.

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  3. Amazing !! beautifully expressed !!

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  4. apt one...
    powerful imagery.
    Thanks for sharing...
    Happy Rally.

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  5. Stunning and beautiful, the images you carved from those castle walls are fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing, so glad I took a sleepy moment this morning to read it!

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  6. Great one my friend. You are truely talented. xxxx gra

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  7. love it.. i'm usually drawn to lighter poems but you paint a vivid and beautiful darkness. thank you. nice to find you via Jingle.

    here is mine
    http://rrel.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/different-forms-as-treasures/

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  8. You have transported me to another place, another time with wonderful words and imagery. I think this is my first visit to your blog. Enjoyed immensely.

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  9. Thank you Ji, it's my pleasure.

    Anita.

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  10. Thank you LeiffyV, it's my pleasure, pleased you enjoyed.

    Anita.

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  11. Hello Gra, thank you my friend, it's good to see you here. xxxx ;0]

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  12. Thank you Robin, pleased you enjoyed and it's my pleasure.

    Anita.

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  13. Thank you Liv2write, pleased you enjoyed.

    Anita.

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  14. Good sense of rhyme, and the whole work moves along with this sort of...ethereal feel to the words and the images. Tight description and good flow, you've carved quite the picture here - and to that end, I particularly like the last stanza. Vividly and skillfully written!

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  15. Thank you Cianphelan for your wonderful comment.

    All of the comments I've received are amazing and inspiring, I truly appreciate them.

    Anita.

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  16. Heavenly poetry :)
    took me away.
    keep writing.

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  17. Thank you Jargnar, I shall.

    Anita.

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  18. Beautiful words Anita...
    I loved reading it :)
    Thank you for the visit...

    Sumit Sarkar
    http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.com/

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  19. Thank you Sumit, pleased you enjoyed.

    Anita.

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  20. Anita, I loved this line esp "shadow walks the glade.."

    Thanks for your comments on my post.

    cheerz,

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  21. Very beautiful imagination..
    Take a look on my poetry..
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart

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  22. beautiful and polished work
    we learn to recognize by being in the dark

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  23. Thanks for your feedback on my rally entry--it sounds like you're the woman with strength in my piece and I am the "girl down the road" looking to you for inspiration!

    And thanks for sharing your piece. The ring to the fuel/fool is a nice touch.

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  24. Great work !! rhyme and the imagery totally pperfect :)

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  25. Lovely words and the image they describe! I enjoyed reading this!

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  26. nice imagery and rhyme! enjoyed it!

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  27. Thank you, Alakaline, Ashbeezone, Somewhere else, Thejuliebook, Ladynimue, Dasuntoucha, Thebeatofmydrum and Dennis.

    Anita.

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  28. Oh wow.

    This is brilliant

    wow.

    And thank you again Anita for visiting my place!

    the intensity and heat of your poetry is fabulous!

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  29. wow!!! I was transported to that place where you described! Love your words! I love your style. flows beautifully
    enjoyed this very much
    thank you

    thank you for your visit and comment

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  30. So much in that piece to take in. Beauty, walls, darkness

    Nicely penned

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon smiles

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  31. I could feel the cold chill as I read this one. Good stuffs!

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  32. Wow... a wonderful poem. Mysterious and I hung on each word. Clever of you.

    Wysteria

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  33. This gave me goose bumps! Not easily done. Thank u. Superb penning!

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