Anita Magdalena

Anita Magdalena

Thursday, 30 December 2010

Poison



Poem by Anita Magdalena...

Poison

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A touch like poisonBetrayal in her eyesHer smile covers upThose deceitful liesIf she has a hungerA desire and needHer touch of poisonWill start to bleedShe is no friendHer words are fakeShe will lead you on inYour back she will stakeDon't be fooledHer heart is blackShe takes what she wantsGives nothing backSo sickly sweetCloaks you in niceWhen the truth is outIt turns you to iceYou have to be knowingI am knowingBe wary all seeingFeel what is showingPlay the gameJust like she willThen turn it aroundGo in for the kill
30/12/2010
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22 comments:

  1. poison..killing title,
    killing talent.
    thanks for the sunshine...

    Happy Rally.

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  2. Something wicked this way comes! Great work!

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  3. Beautiful words on a harsh topic. I loved the flow that these words had, they nearly spilled off the screen they flowed so beautifully. Great poem.
    The Lonely Recluse.

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  4. yes, indeed, we have to be watchful and observant. Your words really cares. Well done.

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  5. Wicked and wonderfully chilling. Good job.

    I like your blog them and header - music as well - different and appealing.

    JamieDedes

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  6. that was harsh and cruel and how often this fake attitude of people end up hurting us...its a beautiful poem..

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  7. Poison..i LOVED THE TITLE Anita../it just took me, and your lines are as breathtaking!
    AWESOME WRITE!

    Mine is here..
    http://mysunshineforeverblogger.blogspot.com/

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  8. ouch..the poison.Written the way it sounds to be..nice

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  9. I enjoyed this. I know someone who resembles this.

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  10. Thank you for all of your comments, truly appreciated.

    Anita.

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  11. interesting write! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  12. congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday again haha.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/

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  13. woooooo... i loved this :D
    brilliant poem there..

    reading colours everywhere..
    here from Jingle's Rally.. You can find my poem at
    http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/

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  14. I like your blog, the theme, the colors, the writing, the everything. The words ... creative!

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  15. sounds like a lady i definitely dont want to mess with...great rhyme scheme...

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  16. Thank you all for such amazing comments. Sorry I've not been here much, will catch up soon.

    Anita.

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  17. Greetings, how are you?
    Your absence is missed, hope you well…
    Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

    Hope to see you in,

    Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

    Cheers.
    xoxox

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  18. Chilling poem.

    I'm so glad I no longer have people like that in my life. May you hang with positive people too -- and there are LOTS of them out there to find.

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  19. http://deeperthanyouthinkm.tumblr.com/post/21387876727/im-not-a-poet-poets-can-smell-color-and-taste

    You got plagiarized...I and a bunch of other people did too...just thought you should know.

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  20. Thank you, much appreciated. :)

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